Oh, it's glorious! It's beautiful and wonderful and just perfect! I loved it. Thank you so much. Here are specific bits I loved, with specificity as to why I loved them:
There are so very many of them and I just can't figure them out. I can calculate speeds, trajectory, flight patterns, fuel burn, engine deflux-"
DEFLUX!!! What the hell is that? That's awesome! Let's hear more about that! Maybe folk are naked for that. Yeah! Naked deflux!
He wasn't used to dainty, Companion-sized china.
Masterful tone! He's a large, semi-muscular man!
"Already settled! Fully and completely settled over here!"
OMG HEART!!! Your voices are PERFECT. Everyone is crisp and clear and true.
Wash collapsed backwards against the sofa and let loose an exasperated sigh.
You do so well writing Wash's physicality. This and the part at the end about how his hands are never still unless he wills them that way. Great, great detail.
her hands being occupied with carrying what looked like a Versta 237 with a missing top jock.
Oh hell yes!
"Me. Husband. To you." He smiled, pleased with the level of articulation he was managing on this topic. He gestured at her curves, which were far from diminished by being covered by sheets. "With the. And the. Married. Me."
It's different! It really is!
Preferably right damn now.
I confess I took a little air guitar solo there.
I know you have traditions, because I am a man that can fly complicated spaceship and am therefore not entirely stupid, but I don't know what those traditions are and I want to know so that I can make sure that our wedding is absolutely perfect for you.
That pretty well brings tears to my eyes, how you worked in all the wonderful into just one sentence.
He actually held his breath as he carefully tied the knot that would say that who Zoƫ was was married. To him.
Ungh! Me too!
This is so great! There is so much wonderful packed in here. I am so happy now and want so badly to know what happens next, and also what deflux is, and also if Kaylee found an emergency backup top jock for the Versta engine. It's all the best things I love about Firefly rolled into one story and I am GIDDY with love of it.
Thank you so much. You are terrific!
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